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“If you or someone that you know or love that can benefit from counseling, keep us in mind. We offer the following when scheduling your appointments: Urgent Appointments are made within 48-72 hours of your call to our office Routine Appointment are scheduled 3-10 days of your call to our office Emergency appointment s available Services: Assessment & Evaluation, Psychological Testing, Psychotherapy & Counseling using Evidenced Based Practice and Care, Prevention & Education, Medical coordination & follow up, Anger Management, Common Psychological Issues include: Stress/Job/Life Transition, Anxiety/OCD/Impulse Control, Depression/Mood Disorder, Relationship Issues, Family Concerns, Trauma, Grief & Loss, Psychosis/Somatic Disorders, Divorce and Separation.”

While I like the content, it has readability issues.  I am wondering if this can be broken up.  There are missing periods, commas (in certain places) and other grammatical issues.  When I sent this, the appointment scheduling, was actually bullet points which might explain some of  the errors.

If you or someone that you know or love that can benefit from counseling, keep us in mind. We offer the following when scheduling your appointments: Urgent Appointments are made within 48-72 hours of your call to our office; Routine Appointment are scheduled 3-10 days of your call to our office;  Emergency appointment s available Services.

This needs to be re-worked…….or is this redundant information?  Please advise.  I did provide some rework to the ideas but still open.

We use evidenced Based Practice and evidenced based interventions that focus on prevention & education, Medical coordination & follow up, Anger Management, Common Psychological Issues include: Stress/Job/Life Transition, Anxiety/OCD/Impulse Control, Depression/Mood Disorder, Relationship Issues, Family Concerns, Trauma, Grief & Loss, Psychosis/Somatic Disorders, Divorce and Separation.